你作為一名英語報(bào)刊的記者,對一次登山活動進(jìn)行報(bào)道。
作文題中已經(jīng)給出了基本的要求,展現(xiàn)你作文分?jǐn)?shù)高度的就是你對活動的評論了。下面讓我們來看看優(yōu)秀的范文是如何處理這些細(xì)節(jié)性的東西的。
1.時(shí)間與地點(diǎn):4月10日,大青山(DaqingMountain);
2.活動的過程;
3.你對于這次活動的評論。
注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
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